RADIO TRAILER Very thorough research & planning which prepared the ground for a convincing radio trailer. You researched the genre carefully, providing evidence of detailed close textual analysis in the blogroll. Your reflections show a sound grasp of genre conventions which enabled you to contribute fully to the joint composition of the short film radio trailer. The trailer functions most effectively in addressing its target audience, with its upbeat first person opening in which Daisy addresses the audience, introduces her friends & invites the audience to share her journey. The trailer combines the film's lyrical music with necessary information about its release & finishes with a neat wrap, "Remember, keep dreaming!" which reiterates the film's name 'Dreaming Daisy' to press it home. The use of imperative verbs (Join me; Keep dreaming) is persuasive. You made a strong contribution to the scripting, recording (as you are Daisy's voice) and revision process.
RADIO TRAILER Very thorough research & planning which prepared the ground for a convincing radio trailer. You researched the genre carefully, providing evidence of detailed close textual analysis in the blogroll. Your reflections show a sound grasp of genre conventions which enabled you to contribute fully to the joint composition of the short film radio trailer. The trailer functions most effectively in addressing its target audience, with its upbeat first person opening in which Daisy addresses the audience, introduces her friends & invites the audience to share her journey. The trailer combines the film's lyrical music with necessary information about its release & finishes with a neat wrap, "Remember, keep dreaming!" which reiterates the film's name 'Dreaming Daisy' to press it home. The use of imperative verbs (Join me; Keep dreaming) is persuasive. You made a strong contribution to the scripting, recording (as you are Daisy's voice) and revision process.
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